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I am going to begin with the punch line: the quality
award-winning book you are currently reading did not start out that way, and is
almost always quite different than the original submitted manuscript.
This post was prompted by a couple recent exchanges between
one or our developmental editors and an author, and myself and an author. One
of these turned out positively, when the author listened, respectively
disagreed on an issue, but understood our expertise and appreciated our time
and guidance and graciously dug in to make his manuscript better. The other
author, well, his ego got in the way of his work (more on ego below). One got
the feeling he was used to telling people what was what, rather than listening
and cooperating with people who knew more than him. He is no longer with us
(his request, happily granted).
Both experiences ended up well for Savas Beatie.
Both experiences ended up well for Savas Beatie.
Seeking out a specific publisher in the hope of the
acceptance of your manuscript is an important step for any author. It is often
a daunting and lengthy process that usually ends in rejection. The purpose of
this post is not how to go about the submission process, but what you, as an
author, should do once your book is accepted. The answer is simple: cooperate
in every regard. Leave your ego at the door and listen.
Those who do, succeed. Those who do not usually fail in
demonstrable ways.
Few if any successful marriages begin by picking a random
stranger out of a crowd and proposing. Assuming you care about your
manuscript’s future prospects, choosing a publisher is not that much different
than choosing a spouse. You find someone you like and have things in common
with, including a compatible vision of your future course. You watch them in
action in a variety of settings, and judge accordingly. In other words, you
select a publisher with a winning track record of stellar (and repeat) authors,
award-winning titles, outstanding book design, aggressive marketing, quality
customer service, and so on. And then you follow their advice.
Once you find that publisher (“spouse”), how do you handle
your relationship going forward from acceptance of your manuscript through
editorial development, design, publication, and beyond? Do you view it as an adversarial relationship
or a partnership with someone who knows more than you and has your best
interests at heart because both of your are joined at the hip?
Do you really listen (as in to listen to understand?), or do
you listen only so you can formulate a push-back argument? Do you resist most substantive
suggestions, argue about key points, get heated when your editor offers ways to
improve your work, and then knock the board game to the floor? Surprisingly,
some authors do. This is not only a good way to end up in divorce court rather
quickly, but also to never be accepted by that publisher again and earn a
negative reputation in what is really a very small community.
Editors and publishers talk. A lot. Especially after the second gin and tonic. When books leave us, I often get an email or a phone call asking, "What's wrong with this author? Or is there an issue with the manuscript? Why didn't you fight to keep it? Should I accept it?" On occasion, I make those phone calls, too.
Pull up a chair and let me explain.
Editors and publishers talk. A lot. Especially after the second gin and tonic. When books leave us, I often get an email or a phone call asking, "What's wrong with this author? Or is there an issue with the manuscript? Why didn't you fight to keep it? Should I accept it?" On occasion, I make those phone calls, too.
Pull up a chair and let me explain.
Think of your publisher as you might an architect or
engineer. Do you hire an architect with decades of experience to design your
house and then argue about where support beams go? Or what building materials
are up to code? Or whether too many windows weaken a wall? Do you insist on a
roof the architect repeatedly tells you is too heavy? Or demand a design the
expert explains will destroy the resale value of your dream house?
One would hope not. These are all fundamental matters that
go to the heart of the viability of your building, whereas adjusting the width
of a hallway or making your kitchen a little larger do not. You have seen this
architect’s successful and award-winning work before—that is why you hired him.
Signing a contract with him does not magically give you a degree in that
subject or the decades of experience he has under his belt in the pond you now
wish to wade into.
A publishing company puts its own time, expertise, and
money—lots of it—on the line with your manuscript. You selected that company
because you know the quality of the final product. Those great books don’t
magically end up looking and reading as they do. There is a process along the
way that is often grinding and time-consuming. And well worth it.
The Schedule.
When the publisher sets a schedule, or asks you to wait
patiently because the company has its own internal ways of doing things—listen.
Patience is a virtue. You have one book that consumes your thoughts. The
publisher has scores of them in various stages of acceptance and production.
You send one email to a publisher and don’t get an immediate reply, but the
publisher gets 150 a day—and deals with everything else. Everyone at the
company who needs to know, knows you exist. When your turn comes in the
schedule, rest assured you will hear from your publisher.
The Development.
Most publishers assign a developmental editor (they have different
labels at different companies) to craft your manuscript into a book. This
includes everything from the length of chapters and chapter order, to what
should go into the footnotes, proper transitions, what belongs in the
appendices—the works. When they speak--LISTEN to what they tell you. If they
tell you there is too much “fat” in your book—LISTEN. If they suggest cutting
your work from 150,000 words to 120,000 words because of redundancy—LISTEN. They
understand the pitfalls most authors cannot see—and will warn and advise you accordingly.
When an editor explains that your manuscript isn’t grounded
in enough firsthand sources—he is telling you your structure does not have
enough of a foundation to stand on its own. He is your architect. To argue is
akin to replacing your brain with your ego. When expert readers review your manuscript
and think it is confusing or difficult to follow, or poorly structured or
reasoned, and offer key substantive suggestions on how to improve it—are you
listening, or is your ego pushing back against the very expertise you “hired?” Work
with them, not against them. Cooperate.
Cooperation, however, does not mean bow down and always say
“yes.” It means know how and where to pick your battles. Make your own respectful
suggestions and do your best to work hand-in-hand as you would with your spouse
on matters of import to you and your family. Never forget (there is that “ego”
thing again) that your experienced developmental editor crafts rough
manuscripts into polished books on a daily basis. You don’t. He has gone
through this same process dozens of times. The odds are, you have not. He understands
weight-bearing walls and inspection codes better than you do.
Here is another way to look at it: Who is more likely to be the better judge of the end product, someone working with editors and outside reviewers, all of whom agree on X, or an author who does something entirely different for a living digging in his heels and demanding Y. The author is betting his ego, while the publisher is betting his livelihood. Clarifying, yes?
Now think of what you, as an author, do for a living. Now, whatever that is,
imagine someone who does not do what you do asking your advice, and then arguing
with this and with that and then rejecting it. No one is always right, but if
you are advising on matters within your area of expertise, the odds are pretty good
that your advice is sound--especially if you have a long track record of success.
Ask any person who has achieved success in their chosen
field how they became successful. Nearly all of them will candidly tell you
they sought out people who had already done what they want to do—people who
knew more than they did. They then put their ego aside, listened, cooperated,
and followed their advice.
My mentors were Tom Broadfoot, Bob Younger, and a friend who worked in high places in publishing in NYC. I was a lawyer and had written a few things that had manged to get into print--but I was not a publisher. But I wanted to be one. So when experts like Tom and Bob told me things--I LISTENED. I LEARNED. I COOPERATED. I put my ego aside and used my brain to think. Success heals any bruises your ego might suffer along the way.
My mentors were Tom Broadfoot, Bob Younger, and a friend who worked in high places in publishing in NYC. I was a lawyer and had written a few things that had manged to get into print--but I was not a publisher. But I wanted to be one. So when experts like Tom and Bob told me things--I LISTENED. I LEARNED. I COOPERATED. I put my ego aside and used my brain to think. Success heals any bruises your ego might suffer along the way.
If there is a true roadblock on a key matter, you might
respectfully ask for another set of eyes on that issue in particular. Maybe
like this: “On this issue we see things differently and it is very important to
me. Before you make your decision, would you mind if the managing director or
another editor takes a look at this one issue? I would appreciate that.”
I don’t know of a single publisher or editor who would not
honor that wish. That is much better than getting heated, pushing back, complaining,
and leading with your ego instead of your brain.